Kurt Brindley is currently running a flash fiction contest in the comments section based on a picture of an abandoned car near where he lives. My entry was disqualified for being too long (because I didn’t read the instructions carefully smh!). My second attempt also failed but I got a rough little sonnet out of it which I will post below.
You should go check out the entries though. My favorite is Cocoa Fierce & The Pantyhose Strangler by Sean C. Wright-Neeley. There are some other good ones though. Vote with likes! Make an entry! It’s fun!
“Rusted: A Failure in Rhyme”
It all begins deep within the dark muddy womb of the earth
Nothing then, but an inchoate mass of soil, stone, and ore
Ripped by iron claws in diesel-fueled caesarean birth
Then melted, beaten and molded on the assembly line floor
Sintered, welded, soldered and sewn into something entirely new
A shining metal triumph of human design and engineering
Within the growling engine, gears and pistons firing fast and true
Burning fuel full-speed ahead, guided by Man and power-steering
But friction and time wears down the workings of every machine
And when the belt snaps, the steering fails and the driver loses trust
Abandoning the beast to the ditch as it is, in a grave of leafy green
Where still it lies decaying, fading as ashes to ashes and rust to dust
Little by little returning to the earth from whence it came,
And to the place we all as well, shall too return someday.
Thanks for the compliment. It really was a challenge to keep the “meat” of the story with so few words.
Sorry yours was disqualified. It’s good, too, though!
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Thanks. Loved your entry. I always like to see a working girl get a little justice.
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Ha ha. Pam Grier was my inspiration.
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