Greenest Branch (Skip It) Cache-Cache
Spin. Spinning. Spins.
Circle black.
Cache-cache.
Needle set on the track.
Far Soul Law Tea Doe
Doe Tea Law Soul Far Ray Doe
Doe
Doe
Doe
Skip it.
Skip it.
Spin. Spinning. Spins.
O thou greenest branch, skip, skip, my
deepest longing, cache-cache, my soul, my, my,
my, my soul
O thou greenest branch–I reach, I re-re-re-re-reach
But cannot gray, gray, gray
Skip, skip, skip
Cache-cache
Le chasseur qui chasse le chat
I cannot grasp
Skip it
Skip it
Skip it
Put it to the back, to the back, to the back, to the back, to the back
Back
Back
Back
O thou greenest branch, skip, skip, skip
O my soul, soul, soul, soul tea doe far soul save me ray doe
Save me
Save me ray doe
Skip it
Skip it
Skip it
O thou greenest branch, I re-re-re-reach
I reach
Reach
Re-re-re-reach
But cannot grasp
Skip it
Skip it
Skip it
Scritch-scratch. Cache-cache, le chat qui chasse.
I fa-fa-fa Far. Law. Far. Soul. Tea. Doe.
I fa-fa-fa-fall.
I cannot grasp.
I fall.
Cache-Cache
Cauchemar
Skip it.
Skip it.
Spin. Spinning. Spins.
POP.
What is Inktober? You can learn more about it here.
The Rookery 
This was trippy and disorienting, I like it!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Perfect for the prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Seems to be having a dizzying effect on people o.O
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
As I was about to comment with a smiling emoji (I was lost in translation), your words started playing in my mind. I had to go and read it again and I think I understand it. Is it a song playing on a scratched record? Because if that was what you were going for, that’s exactly what I heard the first time. As I read, I heard the skipping.
Genius 🧐 (dont know why he’s mad, maybe a mad genius lol)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yep, that was very much the intent!
LikeLike
😁 yay!
LikeLiked by 1 person
It took me two reads to grasp it…(I am still not very sure though!). My head is dizzyyy tooo!! LOVED IT, Rook! ❤️😍😍😍👻👻 And that drawing is really great toon
LikeLiked by 1 person
This one is a little obscure, it probably makes more sense in my head than on the screen.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha!! Happens all the time to writers but no…it did make sense…😊 And I found it beautifully constructed. Well done, Rook. As always. ❤️💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Shades of Gertrude Stein! I like it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I haven’t read her stuff in a long time, but now that you mention it I can see where you would get that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love experimental writing. You’ve inspired me to publish my own.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Go for it!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Will do…:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hippy, dippy, trippy post…
LikeLiked by 1 person